Friday, November 12, 2010

Chapter 4

I decided not to visit on the event that my wife has become ill. She caught it from our daughter Elizabeth, maybe this would  not have happened if we never adopted her. Still i must be positive and be here for my wife. Victor i hope you can handle your own and are still alright. For now i must be here, i will see you soon.
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2 comments:

  1. -alexNovember 12, 2010 at 1:36 PM

    Nice use of events I did not know you could write this well. Good job.

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  2. AnonymousNovember 22, 2010 at 7:16 PM

    Constructive comment:

    Josh... gotta say, this is... well, I am not feeling much emotion or heart in this post. It's short and choppy, to be blunt.

    Write it out, as if you're really seeing the story unfold from Alphonse's eyes.

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